way to go
I loved the texts, they were pretty good a tad depressing but no worries. Loved the beat too. for advice, next time you could try focusing on making the vocals sound a lil' bit rougher, you're not reading, you're rapping :). The texts may be good, but you always have to bring them the way you feel them.
Thumbs up for shadowville for making the beat by the way, it was really good.